From 41d6cdd0474370c9e2c533095597f683c553fe65 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Thomas Pietrzak <thomas.pietrzak@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 2 Feb 2022 10:17:09 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Bits in loop.

---
 hdrmain.tex     |  3 ++-
 tex/0-titre.tex |  4 ++--
 tex/4-loop.tex  | 14 +++++++++++---
 3 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/hdrmain.tex b/hdrmain.tex
index 07938e7..e1bafe9 100644
--- a/hdrmain.tex
+++ b/hdrmain.tex
@@ -7,7 +7,8 @@
 \author{\Large Thomas Pietrzak}
 \date{}
 
-\includeonly{tex/0-titre,tex/2-output,tex/3-input}
+%\includeonly{tex/0-titre,tex/2-output,tex/3-input}
+\includeonly{tex/0-titre,tex/4-loop}
 
 \begin{document}
 
diff --git a/tex/0-titre.tex b/tex/0-titre.tex
index 50db75f..64058a4 100644
--- a/tex/0-titre.tex
+++ b/tex/0-titre.tex
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
   \begin{center}
     \vspace{10mm}
     \raggedright
-    Faculté de Sciences et Technologies\hfill École Doctorale SPI\\
+    Faculté de Sciences et Technologies\hfill École Doctorale MADIS\\
     Département Informatique%\hfill
   \end{center}
   \end{textblock*}
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
       Discipline : Informatique
 
       \vspace*{\stretch{1}}
-      Spécialité : Interaction Homme-Machine
+      Spécialité : Interaction Humain-Machine
 
       \vspace*{\stretch{2}}
       {\LARGE\bfseries Forging digital hammers: the design and engineering of empowering interaction techniques and devices}
diff --git a/tex/4-loop.tex b/tex/4-loop.tex
index 25c6017..af45236 100644
--- a/tex/4-loop.tex
+++ b/tex/4-loop.tex
@@ -263,8 +263,16 @@ Haptic wristband for gestural interaction
 
 => Fail 1: Quantitative benefit
 
+focus on feedback rather than interaction
+
+  => Trravaux direct manipulation
+
 => Fail 2: Qualitative benefit
 
+PAD \cite{mehrabian96} and presence \cite{witmer98}, significant difference in sensory and realism factors.
+
+ => travaux embodiment
+
 Distal touch
 
 Direct Manipulation~\cite{gupta16,gupta16a}
@@ -272,7 +280,7 @@ Direct Manipulation~\cite{gupta16,gupta16a}
 Direct manipulation is one of the most fundamental foundation of GUIs~\cite{schneiderman83}.
 It provides valuable usability benefits that highly contributed to the success of GUIs over command line interfaces.
 Yet, the description of this paradigm relied essentially on visual cues.
-In this project we explained how to adapt the concept of direct manipulation to tactile displays.
+In this project, we explained how to adapt the concept of direct manipulation to tactile displays.
 
 \subsection{Summon interactions}
 \label{sec:summon}
@@ -280,7 +288,7 @@ In this project we explained how to adapt the concept of direct manipulation to
 Summon interactions~\cite{gupta17}
 
 3D gestural interaction in the air faces difficult challenges due to the contact-less nature of this interaction style.
-The absence of physical buttons, or other unambiguous activation action makes it difficult to segment gestures.
+The absence of physical buttons or other unambiguous activation action makes it difficult to segment gestures.
 As a consequence, the system constantly interprets the users' actions.
 Therefore the user is always potentially interacting with the environment.
 This is known as the Midas touch problem, as a reference to the Midas king in the greek mythology, who turned everything he was touching to gold.
@@ -289,6 +297,6 @@ This is known as the Midas touch problem, as a reference to the Midas king in th
 \section{Contribution of haptic to sense of embodiment}
 \label{sec:embodiment}
 
-\cite{witmer98,slaterr99,slater09,kilteni12,roth20,peck21}
+\cite{witmer98,slater99,slater09,kilteni12,roth20,peck21}
 
 \cite{richard20}
-- 
2.30.2