Vague intro chap III.

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     \node[anchor=south, minimum width=2.6cm, rotate=90, outer sep=5mm](funnelevaluation) at (events.west) {Funnel of evaluation};
     \draw [->, -stealth', thick,transform canvas={xshift=1em}]
       (funnelevaluation.east |- sensing.north) to (funnelevaluation.east |- phrase.south);
-    \node[anchor=south, minimum width=2.6cm, rotate=270, outer sep=5mm](funnelexecution) at (command.east) {Funnel of evaluation};
+    \node[anchor=south, minimum width=2.6cm, rotate=270, outer sep=5mm](funnelexecution) at (command.east) {Funnel of execution};
     \draw [->, -stealth',  thick,transform canvas={xshift=-1em}]
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   %  \node[anchor=south, minimum width=2.6cm, rotate=90, thick,draw=black!20,fill=black!20] at (n.north west) {Implementation};

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       Spécialité : Interaction Humain-Machine
 
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-      {\LARGE\bfseries Forging digital hammers: the design and engineering of empowering interaction techniques and devices}
+      %{\LARGE\bfseries Forging digital hammers: the design and engineering of empowering interaction techniques and devices}
+      {\LARGE\bfseries On the critical role of the sensorimotor cycle on the design of interaction techniques and interactive devices}
 
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       XXX 2022
@@ -72,6 +73,8 @@
         & XXX & Professeur à XXX\\
         & XXX & Professeur à XXX\\
         & XXX & Professeur à XXX\\
+        \\
+        \emph{Garant :} & Stéphane Huot & Directeur de Recherches chez Inria\\
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 \end{Abstract}
 
 
-separation sometimes necessary, to isolate an input or output phenomenon.
+The previous chapters focused on the way we leverage haptics for the design of either input or output systems.
+The first chapter, about haptic as the sense of touch, barely mentions input.
+At the opposite, the second chapter, about haptic as the motor ability, barely mention output.
+%Knowledgeable readers may be frustrated that these 
+This separation sometimes seems to make sense.
+%It was mostly the case in the contributions discussed in these chapters.
+For example Tactons used to convey information for notifications does not necessarily require user input.
+However combining output with gestural input enable users to get more detailed information~\cite{pasquero11}.
+Multi-touch and gestural interfaces generally use visual feedback to compensate the lack of physicality of controls.
+But the problem remains the same: whether the feedback is visual or haptic, it requires a systematic design.
 
+The message of this chapter is that input and output have an equivalent importance for the design of interactive systems, and must be designed together.
+This is not as trivial as it seems to be at first sight.
+\fixme{finish this}
+
+%However vision is generally already used to display a lot of information.
+%In the case of smartwatches, the screen real estate is limited.
+%Therefore it would be wiser to keep or restore haptic properties that we daily use with physical objects.
+%Such interactions require a systematic design that combines input with haptic output.
+
+%The point of this chapter is saying that previous chapters should be part of this one.
+
+%separation sometimes necessary, to isolate an input or output phenomenon.
 
-The point of this chapter is saying that previous chapters should be part of this one.
 
-Humans and systems are the same kind of entity, interacting with the world in a similar way. Not because it has to be, but because we took inspiration from humans to design interactive systems.
-Orr this is the most efficient, most obvious, or only way to do this.
 
 \section{The limits}
 
 Haptic wristband for gestural interaction
 
+\paragraph{Apparatus}
+
 \subsection{Quantitative limitations}
 
 focus on feedback rather than interaction
@@ -38,7 +58,11 @@ PAD \cite{mehrabian96} and presence \cite{witmer98}, significant difference in s
 
 
 
-\section{Coupling}
+\section{Modeling humans and interactive systems}
+
+Humans and systems are the same kind of entity, interacting with the world in a similar way.
+Not because it has to be, but because we took inspiration from humans to design interactive systems.
+Or this is the most efficient, most obvious, or only way to do this.
 
 \subsection{Human side}